The Moon Speaks
This is pretty good. You've generated an intimate atmosphere around the characters' interaction. Maybe enhance the ethereal description of Anuna's form and the surrounding air beyond frequent use of 'shimmer' and 'hum'.
Oh, you're right! Every writer has their crutch words, and I guess mine are those. Thanks for letting me know, I'll work on that!
This is pretty good. You've generated an intimate atmosphere around the characters' interaction. Maybe enhance the ethereal description of Anuna's form and the surrounding air beyond frequent use of 'shimmer' and 'hum'.
Oh, you're right! Every writer has their crutch words, and I guess mine are those. Thanks for letting me know, I'll work on that!